
The mom in me swells with pride when I read this poem composed by my 8 year old daughter… makes me feel blessed.. along the journey of parenthood, where I must have made multiple mistakes, I guess I did something right…
But when did my lil darling, my first born, the apple of my eye, grow up so much? Don’t grow up so fast, my bacha… I miss you being my baby…
Here is her composition…
Love is good for you! It warms your heart,
Yes, love gets you to a great start.
You’ll find yourself smiling, if love you learn;
Happiness, joy and contentment you’ll earn.
Love yourself above all,
Rich or poor’s not important at all.
Inside your heart, you’ll find life’s true measure;
You’ll discover love is your greatest treasure.
If you love the world and those around you,
You’ll find that friends surround too!
Give them your trust,
Respect their feelings,
You’ll see love can do all kinds of healings.
Even a small insect should be respected,
All’s worth love nothing to be neglected.
Love is good for you!
Composed by Aisha Narwal
Aww that’s so beautiful
She is way talented
Keep it up and encourage her to write
A star is in making
With love
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Thank you so so much! Will show her the comment in the morning! Can already see her face gleaming with pride!
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If this has been written by your 8 year old, you should really be very very proud.
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Totally! She surprised me too!! Yes… all welled up reading it 🙂 Hence, shared 🙂
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Aisha will grow up to be a great poetess. Encourage her to write more.
I loved her poem. Lots of hugs and kisses to her.
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Thanks so so much 🙂 Will definitely encourage her.. your comment helps:) Hugs and kisses back 🙂
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Very beautiful.. she is very talented..
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Thanks Roopali😊🙏
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This is such a lovely poem by a small girl. Your girls are very cute. She has good talent and you are doing a great job by posting them here.
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Thanks so much Deepa 😊
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Surbhi, such a lovely poem, has come straight from the heart of your beautiful child. This speaks volume about her thoughts and her ability to play with words and place the complexity of emotions in such balance, signs of maturity and she is power house of talent, it is time for you to nurture this hidden potential of her. And as a parent nothing can be more joyful then seeing the voice of our child discovering the ways to explore the world with words and making a difference…
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Thank you so so much for the lovely compliment Nihar… humbled and honoured as a parent.. yes, truly hope I can do justice to my role as a nurturing parent here .. and give the world a kind hearted human !
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You should be very proud of your daughter, one is lucky to have a daughter, and those we have they know it and god bless her.
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Thank you so much again 🙏Truly… daughters are the best!
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Such a beautiful heartfelt poem…naturally gifted 8 year old!!
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Thanks so much Jayanthi!
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How beautiful!! God Bless her..loads of love as love is good for you and me too…
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Thank you so much:) yes, love truly does make world go around!
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Amazing…simply amazing. Your daughter is so good with expression. I can’t believe!!! congratulations.
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Thank you so much… yes she surprised me too! Feeling blessed !
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You should frame this poem Surbhi !! Such a precious gift from the little one !! Loads of hugs to her .
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Thanks so much Neha! That’s a great idea actually! Will do 🙂 Hugs !
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So beautiful and pure. You are indeed lucky to have Aisha as your daughter. I know what you must have felt. My daughter is my treasure too. She is 6 but her creativity is beyond her age. Truly blessed to have her. #surreads #myfriendalexa #blogchatter
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Touchwood and God bless your daughter! Girls surprise you, and sometimes do things beyond their age, don’t they?
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Amazing and beautiful post. Beautifully penned thoughts.
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Gracias!
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I think I needed to read this today. Thank you. Your daughter is a genius!
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Thanks so much dear ! Glad you liked it!
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Ahem! Ahem! Is it time to have another separate blog for the budding poet we have. Head over heels in love with the poem. It is beautifully worded and right metered.
However, the outstanding point is the message she gives with her poem. Much needed in today’s world.
Dear you are definitely doing the right things as a parent for her to cultivate such thoughts. 🤗 God bless you both and Ani too
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Thanks so so much dear! I think so… I will soon need to create her blog too 🙂 Right now, doing my best to encourage the good old pen n paper 🙂
The maturity of message amazed me too…now I know what my dreamer is thinking when lost in her day dreams! Grateful for your love and abundant blessings!
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Hats off to your kid and to you too. She has worldly knowledge that you should be proud of. Contentment, even insects need to be respected and love heals everything – such a profound wise words from a little girl. Kudos to her. Sure, Love is good for her and for all. A big bear hug to her!
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Awww… thank you for the lovely comment! She will be so happy to see this one 🙂 Hugs right back!
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So beautifully written ! Keep encouraging her as she is really talented.
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Gracias 😊
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It is so so beautiful and had tears in my eyes thinking about my kids that how fast they grow and wish to hold them and their achievements forever.
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Gracias dear 🙂 Truly , a mum can understand… kids do grow up fast… wish they could be our babies forever!
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Wow that’s awesome..this little girl is precious..what lovely words from a eight year old .
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Gracias Neha 😊
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Great poem. Wishing her all the best. I’m sure she will become a great poetess in the future.
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Thanks so much Sudip 🙏😊
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Nicely written. Keep appreciating her and watch the miracles shine.
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Gracias Mahesh! Yes, that’s a good reminder… kids blossom with positive feedback!
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